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LinkSonicK
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Alone

Unread postby LinkSonicK » 27 Sep 2011 18:42

I wrote this song during a very dark time in my life, but I believe it may be one of the best songs I've ever written.


I was there
Right when you needed me
But you let me fall
On devils wings
Now your gone
And I'm alone
I'm alone...

Now I'm alone
Ill end it here
Goodbye my friends
You were never there
I thought you cared
But you never dared
To save me
To save me...

They always say
It ends in 3s
But who shall dare
To come with me
So im alone
Still alone...

Im still alone
I died right here
Friends are gone
Though they were never there
You never cared
Never dared
To save me...

Now I'm alone
All alone
Still alone
Always alone
Alone!

Im alone
Now you care
But its too late
Im no longer here
You say goodbye
And shed a tear
Now your alone
Alone here



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Re: Alone

Unread postby Brianna » 27 Sep 2011 18:44

Wow, that is really good. I really like the first part. Good job!



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Re: Alone

Unread postby ValentinThirteen » 27 Sep 2011 19:08

Dark, yes...but very good!



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Re: Alone

Unread postby Bassagainst » 15 Oct 2011 23:31

I love the Dark Lyrics they kinda remind me of a bad time in my life. Again sweet Lyrics!




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