hey heres some of my lyrics i wrote tell me what you think

[andymister222]

its called side effects of a pickup line
It starts off with a phone conversation
a girls call its late wakes the guy up
shes really drunk and pretty Honry

You reach out and touch my face
your wrists still scarred with hate
and I pull you close to me
but you still can't see that this means more than one night to me

I know I’m not the first person to be here and will not be the last
but you are my only one and I'm just a temporary fix for you

As I pretend that we are ok
And that you want me half as much as I want you
because I’ve made you my rock
But I’m Just a stepping stone to you

I know I'm not the first person to be here and will not be the last
but you are my only one and I'm just a temporary fix for you

And we get to that point
the reason I'm here
the only thing you refuse to fake
and the only thing that isn’t a lie

I know I'm not the first person to be here and will not be the last
but you are my only one and I'm just a temporary fix for you

I can only bring myself to write my thoughts
Cause I can’t bring myself to speak these words
Because it’s your reaction I can’t take
Of you demanding I stay
Or your painful indifference

Because this lip sync called us
Is coming off cue
Your timing is off of my hearts rhythm

And I understand I wasn’t the first there
But I hope that you know I was the only one that cared

[Brittany Brink]

Hey those were really great lyrics I liked them alot your a good writer! How many songs have you written?

[andymister222]

like 1 and a half

[Brittany Brink]

lol well that's a half of a song more then me I've only written one and I don't even like that one it's not even worth letting other people read haha =]

[andymister222]

lol ya i have never shown these to ppl i know

[Brittany Brink]

why not, their good lyrics I don't see anything wrong with them I like them alot it's a hell of alot better then anything I've ever written before! =]