SPWC

My heart dies
My fears stay
I cant think
Please get away
Cause I’ll never be
What you except of me
I’ll never see
The star you see in me

This is it
I have to quit
No time to cry
But I see it in you eyes

Your tears
Cut me to shreads
There like daggers
Cutting threw thread

I want to be
Everything
I want to feel
Your chest breathing
But I tie you down
I break you now
I cut you down
Just leave me now

please comment tell me what you think evem if you hate it

It's good but seems more like a poem to me. A couple of words are spelled incorrectly.

What you except of me - expect

But I see it in you eyes - your

Thanks for having the courage to post this.

lol i think it was phillup paulmen that once said "im writer i dont need to now how to spell" thank you for commenting

You're welcome.