In Body and Heart

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TheEmptyAutumn999
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In Body and Heart

Unread postby TheEmptyAutumn999 » 06 Jun 2010 05:26

This is a sonnet I wrote for my English II class at G-Star School of the Arts.
Its about two things, my Girlfriend and my Epiphone SG.

It's called In Body and Heart.

To me, my lady’s far fairer than most.
Her aura, blacker than the midnight sky,
Her voice, as warm or cold as supposed.
And a wolf howls loudly at the same time.
The night greets her with the bright moon’s smile.
In my arms she will rest, including today.
To caress her so gently a while,
I think no one else has held her this way.
Small acceptance has been earned in her wake,
For her flaws are what most people would see.
But her appearance is not what I take
To inspire love and lyrics for me.
Barely any warm feelings you will find.
Yet she’s fairer than most, least in my mind.

What do ya think? I think its okay. I wrote it for my GF, so I wanna know what you think. Wow that was redundant.
Last edited by TheEmptyAutumn999 on 24 Jun 2010 12:39, edited 1 time in total.


Hey.
My Favorite Color is Green.
My band is The Empty Autumn.
My Nickname is 'Tails'.
and I have but two needs to live in life to make it full.
"All I Need's A Guitar and a Girl"
~Miles 'Tails' M. of The Empty Autumn (From the lyrics of my song "Stare at the Sun")

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Re: In Body and Heart

Unread postby Burried4U » 24 Jun 2010 09:33

I'm not a guy, but that was pretty awesome. gotta admit, I could never write anything that good. Good job. :smile:



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Re: In Body and Heart

Unread postby KoriHarashi » 24 Jun 2010 10:33

Im not a guy either, yet that was pretty sweet. I bet your gf loved it[/color] :tongue:



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Re: In Body and Heart

Unread postby TheEmptyAutumn999 » 24 Jun 2010 12:39



Hey.
My Favorite Color is Green.
My band is The Empty Autumn.
My Nickname is 'Tails'.
and I have but two needs to live in life to make it full.
"All I Need's A Guitar and a Girl"
~Miles 'Tails' M. of The Empty Autumn (From the lyrics of my song "Stare at the Sun")


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