A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

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A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

Unread postby Jessamy » 19 Jun 2010 22:55

Hi guys! I've got a friend who writes fan fiction who wants to write a Shim Moore story, as she is a fan. I am helping her out with info so that the story can stay accurate and also just helping with the creative process. I've read her works before and let me tell you this should be a very good story. It is essentially going to be a love story, length undetermined. We came up with a huge list of possible titles and we can't choose one we like best...can you guys help?

thanks!

jess

TITLES! (all are sick puppies lyrics)
What are you looking for?
A sin worth believing
A mirror of society
stuck like flies on sticky tongues
the scars too hard to hige
don't walk away
my glass is empty
white balloons
rubble beneath my feet
paranoid to paralyzed
fate won't deliver
spell it out real slow
living in between the lies
i wanna wake up
so sick of dreaming
kiss it goodbye
do you know how it feels
welcome to the real world
consciously unconscious
tell me what i wanna know
my life's so pitiful
we're all rotten
it's a wicked way to die
too many words
welcome to my world
in the middle of the end
time will pass
nothing really matters

thanks so much for helping guys! alex is really excited to get this story up!




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Re: A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

Unread postby araida_8@hotmail.com » 20 Jun 2010 01:20

i like " A sin worth believing "



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Re: A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

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Re: A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

Unread postby Sam » 20 Jun 2010 10:25

what are you looking for


Also to pick a good title what kind of love story. Will it end sadly or happy?



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Unread postby Jessamy » 20 Jun 2010 10:44

right now we're thinking happy. here i'll give you guys the intro to sort of give you an idea of what's going on

Chapter 00

Fake: One that is not authentic or genuine; a sham

Fake is exactly what I've become. When I was about 13 my father began to dictate the way I lived. He wouldn't stand for who I really was, calling me a "gothic satanist." He forced me to become what society views as a normal girl. Believe me, I fought it. I really tried. But after a short while of resisting, the violence started. First, it was just small stuff, like insults and comparisons to the popular girls. But when it turned to him burning my possessions, everything black, baggy clothing, and anything considered to be rock music, I quickly succumbed. I knew it would only get worse for me if I didn't. Four years later, there is no going back for me, and my fake life is so routine I've almost completely forgotten who I really am.

I'm sorry. I jumped right into my life story without introducing myself. How rude of me. My name is Zeke Anna Bradley. I am 17 years old and I currently live in Sydney Australia where we moved to 2 years ago from Vermont. I attend Mosman high school and I have just started my junior year.

Now I'm assuming you'd like to know a little bit more about me personally. I'm 5'6", average weight, naturally blonde. As much as I (internally) detest blondes, I absolutely adore the unique gold hue of mine. I am a part of the popular crowd. I conform to all of society's standards. I'm "into" all the popular stuff, essentially rule the school, and have a huge group of friends.

On the outside, it seems I have the perfect life.

There's a problem though: I'm dying inside...you see....there's this boy...





END CHAPTER
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Re: A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

Unread postby Sam » 20 Jun 2010 10:58

I really like it. I think going into more detail on how she introduce herself would help. I like the beginning talking about her life then introduction is so short, I think it needs more.

I say finish writing the story then you will have a title for it.



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Unread postby araida_8@hotmail.com » 20 Jun 2010 11:56

i think its good.. i cant wait to finsh the story.. i think sam migh be right try finshing the story and then pick from the titles..



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I DO!!!!


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Unread postby Rose » 20 Jun 2010 16:26

What website is this being posted on.
If its on Wattpad you can put videos from youtube next to the story. If there's one every chapter seomeone is bound see it and like one.




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Unread postby Gabby » 20 Jun 2010 20:00

Oh, the codes still work? Too bad I can't remember half of them.

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Unread postby Gabby » 20 Jun 2010 20:09

That would be dandy. :smile:



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Re: A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

Unread postby djgucci528 » 20 Jun 2010 20:49

I think, based on the intro, "A Sin worth Believing" is the best, but I agree with Sam and David. You would get a better feel on the title once you finish the story.


"I, I won't justify
The way I live my life
'Cause I'm the one livin' it
Feelin' it, tastin' it
And you're just wasting your time
Trying to throw me a line
When you're the one drowning
I like where I'm at on my back
Floating down in my own riptide
The water is fine"

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Unread postby Jessamy » 20 Jun 2010 22:20

hahahaahaha not gonna lie i actually REALLY like 'a shim worth believing"...its like a twisted awesome lyric! but it also will fit the story line later on.. i had to actually look at it to see you'd changed the word hahahahah....that may be the title =D

you guys are all so helpful i love you all! :hug: :hug: :hug:




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Thanks us4gim4ru for making my Avatar for me - Many hugs :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug:
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Re: A Shim Moore story a friend is writing

Unread postby David » 21 Jun 2010 00:50

I rock, I know. but keep reminding me. :tongue:



I DO!!!!



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