This is my new song ''Midnight Madness''!
Check it out and tell me what you think?
Midnight Madness:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pc8Jom7tEQo
Trevor Cormier
(vocals/songwriter/guitarist/drummer/piano-synthesizer/poet)
Midnight Madness (original song by me!) CHECK IT OUT! :)
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Midnight Madness (original song by me!) CHECK IT OUT! :)
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Thank you Chandra! Please help spread the word of my music!
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Re: Midnight Madness (original song by me!) CHECK IT OUT! :)
Not bad! If you're going to keep it instrumental only, I think you should add some more instruments and it would sound even better. If you want to keep it the way it is, then I think you should add some vocals. The way it is right now is, not exactly boring, but it feels like it's missing something, if you know what I mean.
It's still pretty good and it sounds like it would make a great base for a full song.
It's still pretty good and it sounds like it would make a great base for a full song.
Now I'm stuck here,
Trapped all alone.
But it's not my time,
I don't want to go.
You can't take me,
Break free these chains.
You can't have me,
I want to live again.
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Thank you ShadoWolf! Please help spread the word of my music!
I couldn't add anything else on ''Midnight Madness'' due to memory limits on my Toshiba (Satellite)-Windows Vista laptop. I need to get a external hard-drive to continue on recording new songs.
I couldn't add anything else on ''Midnight Madness'' due to memory limits on my Toshiba (Satellite)-Windows Vista laptop. I need to get a external hard-drive to continue on recording new songs.
''I do not fear death, for I will rest in the arms of the Lord, I will be in paradise.''-Samantha Michelle Nance (aka: Shelley) (R.I.P. April 7, 1989-September 11, 2009) flutterby727.deviantart.com
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