Ordinary! The finished product by Phoenix Solis

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Ordinary! The finished product by Phoenix Solis

Unread postby SaveTheWorldWithRock » 04 Oct 2011 20:41

So I posted a partial to this song a while back and I finally finished it. I worked really hard on it over a span of months and I'm excited to get the background tracks from my buddy who wrote a gorgeous piano piece that goes to it. Totally stoked to hear it all finished!

I’m not sorry for who I am
Cuz you don’t see me
You think that I’m a monster
Well boy I’m not what you see
I’m not sayin’ that I’m perfect
Or some angel from a dream
I’m just an ordinary girl
Simply put I’m only me

I’m not your super girl
I can’t save your world
But I’m not some evil villain
Tryin’ to tear your world apart
I can be your dream
If you’ll look deep into me
I’m not the girl you think that you see
I’m ordinary

Can you see me the way I am
I’m not some gorgeous goddess
Toying with the hearts of men
You may think that I’m an idol
On display for all to see
But boy I want off this dusty shelf
And back on my own feet

I’m not your super girl
I can’t save your world
But I’m not some evil villain
Tryin to tear your world apart
I can be your dream
If you’ll look deep into me
I’m not the girl you think that you see
I’m ordinary


I can’t save the day
But I won’t turn your skies to gray
I can’t be the girl you want me to be

I’m not what you see
I’ve told you once I’m only me
I’m simply ordinary



The song explains it all. I'm not supergirl but I'm not the evil villain to your life. I'm me, plain and simple and if you don't like it, well I guess that's your problem because God loves me for who I am and I'm happier with myself now that I've cleaned up my act.


"I won't Justify, The way I live my life, cuz I'm the one livin it, breathin' it, tastin' it and you're just wasting your time, tryin to throw me a line, cuz you're the one drowning, i like where i'm at, on my back, floating down, in my own riptide, the water is fine"

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Re: Ordinary! The finished product by Phoenix Solis

Unread postby AllieWallie » 06 Oct 2011 17:37

I love this so much, good job. <3 beautifully written.



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Re: Ordinary! The finished product by Phoenix Solis

Unread postby SaveTheWorldWithRock » 07 Oct 2011 00:01

Why thank you! I've worked hard for a long time


"I won't Justify, The way I live my life, cuz I'm the one livin it, breathin' it, tastin' it and you're just wasting your time, tryin to throw me a line, cuz you're the one drowning, i like where i'm at, on my back, floating down, in my own riptide, the water is fine"


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