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Tdaelan11
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Look at this and tell me what you think

Unread postby Tdaelan11 » 15 Oct 2011 16:39

Olivia wait up hear me out
What are you so mad about
Give me a reason give me a break
I wanna make you happy no matter what it takes
O olivia give me a chance
Lets not go thru the same ol song and dance 
Can i see you you say no i cant 
Standing here with syntoms of sorrow 

Two days pass and i miss you too much
Feeling so cold without your touch
And without the world in your eyes
My mistakes i despise 
Ive never been like this before
Olivia you've reached into my core
Not seeing you makes me want you more
Losing my mind stuck in my room
Daydreaming about you

Olivia olivia now can you see 
Olivia from what you've heard can you believe 
Olivia olivia do you think of me
O olivia

 these illusions turned into life
Bringing me back in 
Baby im so sorry for everything that has happen
Im here and i will let go
Dont think about leaving me o no



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Re: Look at this and tell me what you think

Unread postby Bassagainst » 15 Oct 2011 23:28

Dude Sweet lyrics! Love it!



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Re: Look at this and tell me what you think

Unread postby Tdaelan11 » 15 Oct 2011 23:48

Cool thanks man!



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Re: Look at this and tell me what you think

Unread postby xlpurplepixielx » 16 Oct 2011 11:29

That's pretty awesome dude. :)


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