Yet another song, semi-sad as it was inspired by a friend of mine (she helped with the general direction of the lyrics)
"Blur the Edge"
I stare at myself in the mirror,
what am I doing here.
Losing my mind on a mistake,
that wasn't mine to make.
Nearly leaving myself on the edge,
the edge of silence...here for your else ill be
Lost in the blur of the stars,
yea the firey tail,
wishing that it'll work out right,
right thinkin now I'll fail,
as i am wondering where you are, tonight..
I stare at the blades of my fan,
wishin I could see your hand
back beside me,
I can't take this anymore,
I want you out of my head,
before I end up dead,
as I leave myself on the edge... the edge of silence, yet I'm.
Lost in the blur of the stars,
yea the firey tail, wishing that it'll work out right,
right now thinkin like i fail, as i am wondering where you are, tonight..
Yet when I see your face it
seems I'll never change,
can't move on, can't go back,
from the edge of silence...yea standing on the edge...(2x on second) ...Yet I'm
Lost in the blur of the stars,
yea the firey tail, wishing that it'll work out right,
as I wonder where you are, tonight..
Though wherever you are I'll be...Lost inside of thee because of you, I'll always be...lost on the edge.
Waddya all think?
Song Draft: "Blur"
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Song Draft: "Blur"
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Concerts attended: 9/09-Pensacola Civic
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Re: Song Draft: "Blur"
Thanks Chandra, if anyone else wants to comment or critique its all appreciated
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Concerts attended: 9/09-Pensacola Civic
Favorite Song: Tie between Riptide or Odd One
Favorite Puppy: Emma, bass all the way
Concerts attended: 9/09-Pensacola Civic
Favorite Song: Tie between Riptide or Odd One
Favorite Puppy: Emma, bass all the way
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