SPWC

So I started writing death metal songs. The parenthesis means its scream by the lead vocalist and the brackets means its screamed by the back up vocalist. The song isn't really about anything. Its suppose to be creepy so I thought it's fit for Halloween.

(Eating you live as you lay paralyzed
screaming, withering in pain. Get me out, get me out!
[There's no escape from here.]
Kicking, crying the knowledge that all hope is gone.
Oh God, carry me through this!
[Give up all your hope.]
Fire crackling, bones breaking, what is this place?
Have I died and gone to Hell?)

(Such a tragic fate to live in this turmoil
No way out, nowhere to go.
Living in never ending fear.
Why, why did this happen to me?
I wish I could be freed from my prison
[Let him out!]
People stare as the war rages in my head.)

Release me from their grasps, I want to be free.
Carry me away in outstretched arms, let me know to be alive.
Trembling as i whisper, "Is this not how you live?"
Save me from the demon inside me.

(I wander like a child that's been left all alone.
I wish I could escape this hell I'm in.
[Don't the demons excite you?]
Drag me out, please its eating me alive
Help me, keep me away from the truth.
[They are telling you to go closer.]
You can't walk away from this
save me from myself.)

Release me from their grasps, I want to be free.
Carry me away in outstretched arms, let me know to be alive.
Trembling as i whisper, "Is this not how you live?"
Save me from the demon inside me.

[I must be careful]
(I must be careful of my actions
There is something destructive within me.)
[Someone please save me.]
(Someone save me from myself.)
([Someone save me from myself.])
Someone save me from myself.

Awesome, I like it! Thanx for sharing with us!

Really powerful lyrics. And I would say you definitely nailed "crrepy."

Thanks y'all! I wrote it in pre-calc and I'm probably going to give it to a friend of mine whose in a death metal band.