My heart dies
My fears stay
I cant think
Please get away
Cause I’ll never be
What you except of me
I’ll never see
The star you see in me
This is it
I have to quit
No time to cry
But I see it in you eyes
Your tears
Cut me to shreads
There like daggers
Cutting threw thread
I want to be
Everything
I want to feel
Your chest breathing
But I tie you down
I break you now
I cut you down
Just leave me now
please comment tell me what you think evem if you hate it
some unfinshed lyrics
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theanarchypoet
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some unfinshed lyrics
"We are all subjects of fate, ...though we must act as if we are not" - Phillup Paulman
Monogmy is all she wants from me but i see my life and its way to short
I wrote her name on the bullet, that way the whole world would now that she was the last thing to go through my head.
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Monogmy is all she wants from me but i see my life and its way to short
I wrote her name on the bullet, that way the whole world would now that she was the last thing to go through my head.
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Re: some unfinshed lyrics
It's good but seems more like a poem to me. A couple of words are spelled incorrectly.
What you except of me - expect
But I see it in you eyes - your
Thanks for having the courage to post this.
What you except of me - expect
But I see it in you eyes - your
Thanks for having the courage to post this.
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Re: some unfinshed lyrics
lol i think it was phillup paulmen that once said "im writer i dont need to now how to spell" thank you for commenting 
"We are all subjects of fate, ...though we must act as if we are not" - Phillup Paulman
Monogmy is all she wants from me but i see my life and its way to short
I wrote her name on the bullet, that way the whole world would now that she was the last thing to go through my head.
[color=#000000]
Monogmy is all she wants from me but i see my life and its way to short
I wrote her name on the bullet, that way the whole world would now that she was the last thing to go through my head.
[color=#000000]
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chanse
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