Anyone care to help?

[xomomoxo193]

Hey! I was inspired by sick puppies today and I decided to write a song! Anyone want to help by helping me think of a melody and rhythm for it??

Title: I Wanna Know

Verse 1 and 2:
There's a place in my heart
That actually gives a f***
Don't get your hopes up
Don't push your luck

So if there's ever a moment
That you feel so alone
You're right
Your love I've outgrown

Chorus: Woah oh oh Whatever makes you break
Whatever keeps you awake
Whenever you want me there beside you
Woah oh oh Whoever makes you fall to your knees
Whatever makes you beg and plead
I wanna know that
I wanna know that

Bridge: I wanna know
What is your deepest fear
I wanna be
The one who makes it real! Real! REAL!

Chorus

Verse 3 and 4:
There's a place in my heart
That doesn't want to give up
Don't lie to yourself
There is no such luck

So if there's ever a moment
That you feel robbed of my love
You're right
You will no longer rise above

Chorus

Repeat chorus (slowed down) with added lyrics:
I wanna know that
I wanna know that
I wanna know

These lines will be spoken or yelled: So run away while you still can, boy! HA! I'm not coming back!



I think this would be a really fun song to do. I kind of see it as a mix between a paramore song or sick puppies. I would love to be lead vocalist for this song because it's coming from my heart!

[*J*]

I don't have a rhythm or melody suggestion but I just wanted to say that I love those lyrics!!

[xomomoxo193]

Thanks! They come straight from the heart XD

[Rose]

I could make a guitar part for it if you like, I'm not very good with words but guitar riffs are pretty easy for me.

[xomomoxo193]

That would be really great. Do you have skype? We could do it over webcam. That might be our best bet.

[Rose]

I have a web cam and ichat (AIM), not skype though i cant download anything on my school computer. is there anyway to use it without downloading it?

[xomomoxo193]

hmm not skype but we could use AIM. I have AIM. I will send you my SN in a private message

[AshleySamulka]

I just wanted to say that i think this song is awesome! I love it... your really good!

[alexandria]

I love the lyrics! They are really expressive.

[Adre]

I'm really impressed since I have no talent writing lyrics at all but I really love these. Great job!