We Die Tonight

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We Die Tonight

Unread postby ShadoWolf » 24 Nov 2011 17:52

This is a poem I wrote about a person who has a lot of hate and anger inside of him and he finally cannot contain it anymore and ends up killing everyone around him, including himself in the end. Not autobiographical, of course, so don't worry. :P I just wanted to write something dark.

In the part "Escape the dark, see the light; too bad 'cause there is none. Now's the time that you will find the beast in you has come," it mentions that there is a "beast" inside you as well, suggesting that everybody has a darkness inside of them.

Please let me know what you think.






Now I'm stuck here,
Trapped all alone.
But it's not my time,
I don't want to go.
You can't take me,
Break free these chains.
You can't have me,
I want to live again.
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Re: We Die Tonight

Unread postby Eliza_janet5 » 03 Dec 2011 17:53

i love it! ur poem speaks the truth... we all have darkness inside... but it originates somewhere... and it always builds... anyone not touched by darkness is special... it's all about the supernatural. haha yeah buddi! :crazy: :angel: :hug: :wink:


Love is a terrible crime. It kills the innocent with blood and grime.
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Re: We Die Tonight

Unread postby ShadoWolf » 04 Dec 2011 13:18




Now I'm stuck here,
Trapped all alone.
But it's not my time,
I don't want to go.
You can't take me,
Break free these chains.
You can't have me,
I want to live again.
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Unread postby Eliza_janet5 » 04 Dec 2011 15:42

ur very welcom ^.^ we should like write poems or like any random shiz we come up with back and fourth... it would be like awesome.


Love is a terrible crime. It kills the innocent with blood and grime.
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Re: We Die Tonight

Unread postby ValentinThirteen » 04 Dec 2011 16:23

"Night above, all hell below,
Now the fun begins.
You can never get away,
We're all victims in the end."

My favorite part =D
Very nice



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Unread postby ShadoWolf » 04 Dec 2011 16:25




Now I'm stuck here,
Trapped all alone.
But it's not my time,
I don't want to go.
You can't take me,
Break free these chains.
You can't have me,
I want to live again.
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Re: We Die Tonight

Unread postby ShadoWolf » 04 Dec 2011 16:25




Now I'm stuck here,
Trapped all alone.
But it's not my time,
I don't want to go.
You can't take me,
Break free these chains.
You can't have me,
I want to live again.
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Re: We Die Tonight

Unread postby Eliza_janet5 » 04 Dec 2011 16:26

ever had a moment when darkness totally took over you and you suddenly like realized what you where doing iz like bad??? i'vehad that happen to me a few times... where i cut my arms up... it was crazy... i've done it by my own will before... but never this insane when the darkness came and took over me.... :ugh: :cry:


Love is a terrible crime. It kills the innocent with blood and grime.
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Unread postby ShadoWolf » 04 Dec 2011 16:37




Now I'm stuck here,
Trapped all alone.
But it's not my time,
I don't want to go.
You can't take me,
Break free these chains.
You can't have me,
I want to live again.
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Re: We Die Tonight

Unread postby Eliza_janet5 » 04 Dec 2011 16:39

it's insane how it takes over. i don't even know i'm doing what i'm doing... its like i'm awake... but not awake... its crazy.


Love is a terrible crime. It kills the innocent with blood and grime.
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